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[jazzworth]

Well I've got a few sigs that I made recently. Would love for some advice on how to make it better.



v2 ===



v2 ===
Made this one for a friend.



v2 ===
Working on this one for another friend.

Oh, and the one in my sig too. I've been very productive... O_O

[Dom]

Lose the scanlines in all of them. Scanlines don't work in these sort of things anymore, they're not "fashionable". I like your signature one, just get rid of the scanline and it's even better. Who is the person in your signature?

[jazzworth]

There's only scanlines in one of them and I put it there for the digital effect.

The "scanlines" in my sig comes from the Burberry pattern. I put it in there because Emma Watson (from Harry Potter, the girl in the sig) is the new face for Burberry. But yeah, I've been having qualms with that bit too. I might just get rid of it, or go a different route.

[Ascarine]

Take out the Border on this first, borders never look good in overlay. Scanlines in the 2nd look ok apart from in the rhs cos they darken the entire thing. Brush over them in a vector mask with a low opacity Black. I dont like the sparcles in the other 2, the effects look slightly over done and i would remove some and build up again.

[Ascarine]

Like your current btw

[jazzworth]

I fixed up the first two. I was going to remove some sparkle from the third, but I wasn't sure which one I should work on. Two different versions color-wise.

[Ascarine]

First one looks alot better, and the second's right hand side could still do with some lightening or removal of some of those scan lines. Going in the right direction though = )