Something Completely New To Me

[Ascarine]

I've had a try at doing something Completely new to me so i hope yoU guys like and i appRiciate your critiSism but i'm not Expecting the best of reactions from these two. What You guys think? And what needs changing? i quite like the outcOmes so don't be too harsh but i will understand if yoU have and outburst of discust lol.

First my favorite one and the one i'm most proud of:



And the second called "Rip in Dimentions":

[flatty]

Hmm, dunnow what you trying to make here, is it abstract?
Cause i know these c4d's and with 1 c4d you can't really make an abstract i think
and the smudge isn't really working on the 2nd

I'm sorry m8, next time
Might read some abstract c4d/smudge tuts

Keep it up tho"