First Attempt a Failure Attempt

[JoyRiderUSA]

Fail.

[Kanariya]

Not too bad, render looks a little stretched to be honest.
Blurring isn't too bad.
Deffo potential.

[JoyRiderUSA]

I noticed I did something wrong at the end and I retried with a different one and got this. Text is off but I want to perfect my text detail skills.

[jazzworth]

Stock placement is awkward since you cut his head straight off making it seem imbalanced. And if you're working on your text you've got a lot of work ahead of you, but there's a lot of potential.

[Ascarine]

Render = Warped, Kill the Text, And work on to smudging. Needs more at the sides as well cos its very bare at the sides atm.