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    Default Another New One!

    Hey all, another new signature, complete mess around with it, techniques from a tutorial, but some of my own aswell. Tell me what you think
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    Wireframe is way too apparent imo. I think it should be apparent at her neck down to Shoulder level and should then fade and blend but that may just be me. I only say that cos its a bit too striking atm and makes the focus pull away and to the right. And with that amount of sparkles your gunna blind someone lol. Maybe tone them down coming accross the wireframe and into the forground. Also feel that there needs to be going more going on in the background, but hey again that may just be me.


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    I love this, tutorial please.


    truuuuuuuuuuu

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    Ok thanks for the comment, will take it on board
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    very nice man i dont like the wire frame that much on the right side i love the left side tho but the tag as a whole is great man keep up the good work



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    Thanks for the comment Underoath. Will take it on board
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    the Wireframe is nice like that imo, but the right side could be filled more on top of the wireframe, like on the left
    erase things from her face
    erase the weird c4d on the top right that is really lq
    and try and fix her shoulder, its lq too
    needs depth badly, curves/gradient maps/blur/sharpen/etc
    looks like a WIP imo, but its a really good WIP

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    Ok thanks for your comment Miril
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    I really like what you did here with the wireframe; gives it this cool digital elegance feel. I just think that the right side needs a lot of work, because at the moment it just seems random.

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    Heres the edited version, dont know if i got worse or better lol. Comment please
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