First LP in along time

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[Elramo]

I'd reduce the sharpening a bit. Also the wooden thing he's sitting on doesn't go well with the whole city theme. Nice use of C4Ds and wireframes though.

[cC.ShorterGFX]

ok

[Scrib]

I think it's a bit over sharpened and also i would say that like El i dont think the ramp fits , make it like a road ramp or something but other than that it's awsome well done

[cC.ShorterGFX]

thanks

[Garis]

oversharpened..
plus I think you need erase a lot of wireframe..
it ruins the LP

[Comedy_NL]

oversharpened..
plus I think you need erase a lot of wireframe..
it ruins the LP

Agreed, overdid the wireframes and oversharpened.

But that dont loses the fact that it is a good job!

[Ptka]

I also think you need a better way of blending in the person watching and the car, because they look very super-imposed.
Erase some of the wireframes, maybe make them only streaks leading into the car.
And watch the sharpening, as everyone has already pointed out.