Ma Innocent tag

[Takken]

My newest tag/sig. I like it alot. But what I love about it is its simplicity Lol.



CnC mates!

[Ptka]

VERY nice background, but the render just doesn't fit with this one at all.
Looks way off but keep the BG for sure.
Not liking the text either, I've seen much better from you, just try to keep your renders looking closer to the background.
Again, the BG is hot.
The render is not.
Keep trying on this one!

[tunafish69]

I completely disagree, the only things that need adjustment are; the colors, the lighting and the bg.

The colors are nice, but they clash a bit when looking at the focal, try making the background a softer shade of that color so it goes along with the focal's skin.

The lighting is quite odd, maybe try a 150-200 pixel soft brush on 50 opacity?

The BG flows nicely, but the only part I don't like is that C4D line next to the lighting, if that was gone the BG would be perfect.

[Ptka]

You basically just listed EVERYTHING in the sig...colour, lighting and the BG basically make up all of it, except the render.
It's just a bad render.
Nothing is happening in the sig, the background is great, all it needs is a kick ass flaming render to do it justice.

[Takken]

Hey guys, is the depth good in it?

[Ptka]

At this point I can't really help much more.
I absolutely think the render is a mistake.
It's just a head, nothing is really happening.
This one needs some action.
The background has alright depth though, but some parts of the C4D are a bit sharp.

[+s9.Oath]

the bg is great man and i like the text but umm the render looks like you just threw it in there at the last min lol keep working man you will get it

[Linda]

ITS really nice but i dont like the light much there, it looks.. like its just big white brush puted on,and no work done to it [ sorry ] i just think it distrack me a bit. and the text is realy hard to read , or i need glasses probably xD but other that that, great job!

[Takken]

Wow. That was fast Linda. Thanks!

[Nutter]

It feels a bit lonesome.
You've done more then just add the character in, but she doesn't look like she's filled enough of the sig itself.
Might look better if the sig was taller