Magic

[Ascarine]

What you think?

[Nsta]

Ok don't mind, but critiques are harsh as they sound but helps!
The background is too plain. the sig's render doesn't seems the focal.
adjust the lightsource.
blur. Add Black borders or Which color you like.
and its complete.

[.Innovation]

Personally i find the light source very irritating, i like the rest of tag, just that light source .

[tunafish69]

Ya, if you make the lightsource appear behind the render, it would look much better.

Very nice flow. ;o

[Takken]

Light source too distracting. Make it less bright. The depth is well done though. The flow is good. Keep trying.

[Nutter]

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I think the white light is too strong and is covering the girls face. The C4Ds on the black also don't have much of a shape to them.
I can see that you produced an energy ball in her hand. If you were to improve that, and have the C4Ds some how interact with the ball, it may look better.