Stand by Me

[Dunway]

Yet another sig with a robot in it? still working on my text...

[.TheMentalists.]

Its ok. The lighting is a bit random and the bottom left is a blur?

[Victor76]

dont like the lighting. yes a bit blurry on the left.. if it was cleaned up a bit would look nice.. still needs some more brush work..

[Dunway]

Sharpen up the left side a bit, dump the lens flare, more brush work?

thx for the comments guys... need all the help I can get.

[tunafish69]

I disagree, I don't think it needs more brush work at all.

You have all the effects right there, you just need to bring them out more and add more depth.


Also, I would HIGHLY suggest staying away from Lens Flares for lighting, they don't look all that good. =/

[Dunway]

tunafish-

The depth is something I'm still working to achieve, hoping the more I do, the easier it will be. Text also is a sore spot for me. I need to just buckle down and practice more, this is a great site can't say enough about you guys...