back again...tried really hard

[Dr Hulk]

i'm back again...i tried really hard with this one....

let me know how can i improve...thanks

[λdam]

The text. :'(

What program are you using?
I think you should se the C4D's to another type of blending mode. It might look a lot better.

Optimus looks a bit bright in colour.
I like the smudging in the background.

Sorry if what I've said is such a let-down

[Dr Hulk]

no its not a let down...i'm new at this so its kool..
thanks for the comment tho...it really helps because i'm trying to get better

The text. :'(

What program are you using?
I think you should se the C4D's to another type of blending mode. It might look a lot better.

Optimus looks a bit bright in colour.
I like the smudging in the background.

Sorry if what I've said is such a let-down

[Linda]

Tips:
-Change text of transformers,, and try place text close to the focal, so it dont distract from the main thing.
-use normal border on this one
+cool colours and i love optimus!
-Try make main light on signature.
-work a bit with c4d's, ur on right way!
GJ mate