finally i have a tag...

[Dr Hulk]

i really like this one..

i did it myself and i love it....

what ya think???...getting better right

[Dom]

It's too dark. The background doesn't really seem to have any connection with the render. This is kind of better than your others though.
You need to add a light source and sort out your C4D's because the way you have it at the moment, it's not doing anything to the tag; no flow, no reason to have it there.

[Victor76]

Definitely an improvement.It has some good blending and flow. Might be a tad dark maybe add some more light to the focal.. I like the text but the positioning could be better. Nice work none the less..

[Ascarine]

lol is it just me or is Dom going down a dark route to flaming? I agree with him though. The points that he made were what i would have said just not in that way lol. It is an improvement but stick to tuts closly and see what comes out after a few extensive sessions of looking at stuff.

[Dom]

lol is it just me or is Dom going down a dark route to flaming?

I'm just being as honest as I can. No point in me lying because the artist doesn't improve in any way.