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    Default Green Lantern

    my SOTW entry so what you really think




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    Not bad although I think it's a tad chaotic.
    Nice job on the blending though, text needs work and you might want to crop the sides in a bit as they're emptier than the rest of the tag.
    Not bad lighting too.
    Overall, it needs some tweaks, it has potential so yeah, keep it up.

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    Maybe place the text closer to the focal. Cous the end of the text is hard to read. Nice flow, and effects. I like it




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    that was my idea with the text insane



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    umm it looks like u just put the render on top of those effects i dont like this one that much good job on the back though

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    blending needs work. focal is too centered and out of focus compared to the effects. that should be opposite. work on the lighting too. the soft brush is part of what is killing your quality and it looks unnatural.




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    its not bad. i dont like how blurry the focal is :/ and the sides are too empty...

    its good though, just those 2 things bother me.
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