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[SSSSK]

trying the common style of c4d whoring mixed with my own shit, comments?

[Dom]

Not really feeling this one. The focal is too small and the C4D's take up too much of the canvas. The pink lines are random but I like them, they look cool.
Nice try. Just doesn't work in my opinion.

[MrInsane]

don't like it. The pink lines are cool, but thoose c4ds take up to much space and ruin the sig.

[NoFeaR]

focal is too small but nice compo, just make the focal bigger.

[(-)Ion]

define your focal. you have all of this light in the tag and none of it shining on the focal. fix that and the tag will actually work i'd bet.