[Dom] Spidey

[Dom]

Hello all,
not entirely happy with this one, just wanted something in my signature until I can put my tag I made for my upcoming battle with Radillac. Also getting tired.

Comments/Critiques please?

[w00teR]

Very nice, good c4ds, good text, but it's hard to figure out what's on spideys right leg, it looks like his arm coming from the ground, though it's in the air.

[PRJsober]

bg looks a little too empty. makes the sig look unfinished but good try

[Dom]

Maybe I could try adding a stock background? But then I'd have to take the smudging away and it wouldn't be as much work. What do you think?

[PRJsober]

the whole bg doesn't need to be filled. just a little something behind spidey so it wouldn't look too empty. cause i think with a black bg like that, there's should be a little more effects but that's just me.

[Dom]

No, I agree it does look empty but I don't know what to add to it. :/

[.blueflare]

honestly i hate the choice of c4ds in this tag, it looks blunt :\.

everything else. sex. just sex.

the way u revealed spidermans mysteriousness, INTENSIFIED through that smudgy mist. beast idea there. the light source makes me question where he is, possibly an alleyway aiming at his next foe? the emptiness adds to that alleyway feel, too cool, though wouldnt hurt to add a little something something. the size of the tag also captures spidermans sense of awesomeness. he is too damn cool for a simple 400x100 size tag. fuck that shit, give spidey what he deserves and this is what he would have got.

im glad u made this tag in this fashion i like it : >

[Dom]

haha, thanks blue. I'll change some things tomorrow, I really was getting tired whilst making this and just started throwing things on. Maybe I could add some pen tooling for his spider sense near his head, throw some of the C4D's away and add a alley background?

[.blueflare]

^ thats thinking like a pro.

would be cool if he shot web.

lol shot web.

[Dom]

He is shooting web if you look near the bottom right where his leg is. I think I covered it with C4D's. :>