sig from new guy here

[sjhmachine]

hi am a new guy here
so cnc my sig thanks

[Trauma]

I think you can still do alot more to it.

[sjhmachine]

I think you can still do alot more to it.

for example?

[Victor76]

I dont think trauma knows how to CnC.. For one.. The sig is to monotone. The render could use some blending and FX.. The Text doesnt look good.. The border i dont think you should have.. Try blending the render more.. The idea looks good has potential.. Just need some more to it.. The left is also a bit empty.. If your new to this try our tutorials or google some.. i have some links to good tuts if you want them.. They start from basics to intermediate. Overall its a great effort you just need to finish it it needs more.. Hope i helped a bit more...

[Shane.]

yeah here follow these tips
1. its monotone, u need more then one color
2. text needs work or just take it out
3. your using c4ds for background , and u should use them for effects and blending
4. you should have a light source in this type of sig
5. its too plain work on that

[Victor76]

Yea what shane said lol..

[sjhmachine]

i would like link to tut victor76

[Shane.]

Here check out my Halo tag tutorial it has alot of neat tricks that will help u out alot : )
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http://www.gfxvoid.com/forums/showthread.php?t=54343

[Trauma]

I dont think trauma knows how to CnC.. For one.. The sig is to monotone. The render could use some blending and FX.. The Text doesnt look good.. The border i dont think you should have.. Try blending the render more.. The idea looks good has potential.. Just need some more to it.. The left is also a bit empty.. If your new to this try our tutorials or google some.. i have some links to good tuts if you want them.. They start from basics to intermediate. Overall its a great effort you just need to finish it it needs more.. Hope i helped a bit more...

I do except I cant describe what i think

[.blueflare]

yeah here follow these tips
1. its monotone, u need more then one color
2. text needs work or just take it out
3. your using c4ds for background , and u should use them for effects and blending
4. you should have a light source in this type of sig
5. its too plain work on that

i have to agree on every point here. besides 3. u can still use c4ds for backgrounds just dont make it as obvious ya know