Abstract

**marioman77** · 08-21-2009, 03:38 PM

my first abstract sig.

Rate/CnC

**DR809** · 08-21-2009, 03:42 PM

Looks nice but the the focal is too sharpened. Keep it up your getting better.

**+s9.Oath** · 08-21-2009, 03:47 PM

i agree with DR809 i dun really like the aura around it that much but its not all bad you are getting better man keep it up

**Trauma** · 08-21-2009, 04:18 PM

Nice my first abstract was aweful.

***Takken*** · 08-21-2009, 05:38 PM

THis is a rather neat abstract. The focal is briliant but you need to fill up the empty space in the left side. Keep it up

**ToxicDesire** · 08-22-2009, 12:40 AM

oooooohhhh.. nice work on the colors!

**.blueflare** · 08-22-2009, 01:20 AM

Originally Posted by Takken

THis is a rather neat abstract. The focal is briliant but you need to fill up the empty space in the left side. Keep it up

do what he sayz.

i like the colors as well : >

**SaTe** · 08-22-2009, 01:27 AM

i like the text. and the body

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