Halo...CnC

[Salazar]

CnC and Rate if Possible

[Shane.]

that splater bad , cant see the render, try making the focal more noticable and use better effects

[Dom]

Okay, sorry about the long wait but I am back now and hoping this will help.
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The lighting on this is sooo strong it hurts my eyes and ruins the focal because it's just too hard to see it. The blending is overdone too, your background and focal colours are very similar then you've got the strong lighting. There seems to me too many gradient maps(?) too which is good in a way; you've got the focal the right depth but the colours of the background are too alike.
Your text is awful if I'm honest. Try using clipping masks and smudging.

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I have a list of tutorials for you here that are bound to help. Just make sure you follow them, reading them over and over until you understand it.
Garis' pack of tutorials
Daemons tutorials, the smudging one and a trickier but effective one
My easy tutorial, blending, C4D's and lighting needs to be added but give it a shot.
Lewks spiderman tutorial, C4D placement and flow; and his Clipping mask one.
RaDs gradient maps and such tutorial.

I recommended all of these tutorials to another person too, they're all great tutorials that'll help you improve.
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I hope some of this helps, you'll improve but you need to grab some of those basics first. Sorry about all the nagging sort of feedback but I just want to help.
Good luck.

[Salazar]

I don't really like this. Give me a minute and I'll edit this post with some constructive help.

1 minute
are you making a whole tutorial ? O_O