I made these

[PedoBear]

[DR809]

1. Ugh flow is off. Is that the text next to his hair.
2. Just weird dude, Im not gonna lie.

Hit up the tuts on this site they would do you some good.

[Fusious]

Flow is bad
Border is terrible
Render isn't blended good at all
no effects, no nothing.
You need major improvement bro

[.blueflare]

number 2 is such WIN!!! pedo bear for president!

numbah one needs some cooler effects. tutorials ftw :P