lucy

[RTS777]

[oNo]

very nice i like it just the text which i thought was "ok"
i like the flow and the lightning, just right next to lucy is some type of effect that counters the balance of the flow, and its just too bright.

Off topic, that anime is so awesome.

[RTS777]

without that "just to bright spot" i feel it would have no lighting
and i pretty much blow with text

ill edit with the textless version

[oNo]

i like the textless version, berry nice.

[Jaszo]

Textless version is better,imo!
But i would love to see some c4d on render and frame.

[PRJsober]

one thing that people don't understand is that big sig needs to be filled up or it will look too emptied and won't look right. small sigs on the other hand, could have sorta empty but will still look right. so my advice to you is maybe cropped it to focus more on the focal or add more effects if you decide to keep the original size.

[RTS777]

if it looks empty i would assume its from the lack of depth and not the size

[PRJsober]

not really i see what you're trying to do with this tag here but i bet you didn't notice the lighting on the actual focal. you see how the lighting is actually coming from the bottom left corner and the shadow is on the right? throw a lighting source on top of the focal that's coming from the bottom left corner. little things like this would make the flow better. i don't even think the c4d effects in the right bg is necessary but if you decide to keep it then throw some of that on the left side to balance it out. this should enhance it and oh yeah, crop it a bit. trust me.

[RTS777]

how would you have me crop it, more just focus on the the center of the image?

and now that you bring it up i see the lighting mistake ty

[PRJsober]

maybe from the 2nd finger up and just a tad bit on the bottom needs to go. that way it won't look to empty. try it and see what works for you.