far away dream

[Xelo]

got stuck here.. dunno what to do. or should i keep it as it is now.

c&c plz

[Dakilence]

like it but too many colors distract me.
and need borders.

[XenoDestruction]

The focal is a bit over smudge imo. It seems like smudging has envoloped her except for head. And Dakilience beat me to the comment. Too many color distract me.

[wAndering]

This looks extremely messy, with a tag like this, as opposed to C4Ds as I am, I say throw in a couple of well placed C4Ds around the focal point, and you may be able to save it. You also should work on the flow of this, it seems like you tried to create flow, but it just got lost somewhere.

[rockerdish]

The stars on top right are completely random and looking out of place.

[Xelo]

thanx for comments all. redone the bg on the left, added stars there as well, rockerdish
put a bit off the focal back in as it was smudged to much indeed and also added a lightsource at the right bottom. It looks much better now imo.