Abandoned...

[XenoDestruction]

Back again with some new c4ds on hand:



CnC, i know the text problem.

Improvements?

[MrInsane]

hmm... maybe don't smudge her, make the c4ds go over her and idk the c4d collors don't really fit there in my opinion, maybe some gradiants or something

[XenoDestruction]

Yea i know, gradients would make her a little mono. Maybe turn up the opacity would help... Try later, and thx in advance for giving me the renders.

[wAndering]

If you want to smudge your render, duplicate it and play with the blending modes, it looks better if your focal point isn't thrown across the tag.

I think you could make this look better with a Purple -> Orange Gradient Map set on Hue/Saturation with a mid-low opacity.

[XenoDestruction]

Thanks for the tip! Anymore CnC for me to improve?

[wAndering]

Just one more thing: your C4Ds don't blend well with your background. You should find some way to make them work, perhaps a Hue/Saturation Adjustment Layer over your C4Ds?

[XenoDestruction]

That would make a little mono will it? Will try though. Anymore CnC pls?

[wAndering]

Well, don't rape it with saturation, and you'll be fine.

[XenoDestruction]

k, thx, anymore suggestion ?

[Dakilence]

i got same thing, u gotta blend those c4d. design is all about making it realistic and c4d look just like they are thrown there keep it up its gonna be fine