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[Dakilence]

[Ascarine]

Looks good mate. I may have done it a slighly different way, make the blade in the forground non blurry (for lack of better words) and make the render very slightly Gaussianed. possibly 0.5 on the render and normal on the blade. Get rid of the text, cos it spoils the piece. Text should only be done when it can be blended easily. Computer Script fonts don't usually blend well. U've also rotated it but not quite enough. Needs to be another few degrees CCW. And is it slightly over saturated on the top of the head?

[Dakilence]

kk thx, yes the head i erased some parts top weakly so the smudging from behind on color dodge is pumping out

[Shadow379]

It's good.
You should try using stocks for the bg, cos it would be totally sick.
For a beginner good work, try to add more details and work for longer

[Dakilence]

yes dude thats my biggest problem, i just lose ideas or whatever at some points around 20minutes od doing i just stop cant create XD

[Shadow379]

If you need help then just ask me

[rockerdish]

The lightning is really strange..it doesnt blend in too well and looks bad on the render.

[Dakilence]

dunno mate i find it ok