Abstract

**crazycata** · 10-13-2009, 10:31 AM

Not one of my best, but that doesn't change the fact that i want you guys to comm

***Dom*** · 10-13-2009, 10:52 AM

Not bad, I feel some more vibrant colours would make this better though. Text works. Spice it up a bit in my opinion, would quite like to see a version 2. Keep it up.

**crazycata** · 10-13-2009, 11:08 AM

Ok im back with other vers

v2

v3

v4

v5

**rockerdish** · 10-13-2009, 11:45 AM

V3... put some vibrant colored glow here and there

**--J.O.N--** · 10-13-2009, 02:18 PM

I dont like abstract without atmosphere...

**gr4ph1kP4ND4** · 10-13-2009, 04:23 PM

blech, boring. the vertical line draws your attention too much, and the line of motion is too structured for an abstract piece. i like the colours, theyre pretty ^.^ lol and i like the text a lot

good job :P

**excellence** · 10-13-2009, 05:15 PM

idk, theres something about this that says that it isnt good
its def oversharpened and too contrasted and just looks a mess, i think u should practice this style a little bit, u have the right idea, but it just didnt work out for this 1

**Xelo** · 10-14-2009, 07:36 AM

agreed with above, it is oversharpened. imo it needs a soft cave or space like (blurred) bg.

***SSSSK*** · 10-14-2009, 08:22 AM

you need a blurred space bg or summat like that, lso you need 2 colours that are different or SLIGHTLY similiar because otherwise it looks bland

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