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    Default Moby



    really need CnC
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  2. #2
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    This look really bad...to many focal points+bad colors+lq+compo...Try to do another one...
    My english is bad...


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    you need one smooth object focus, and right now the guy in the middle is too inconsistent, with the varying opacity and hues. the text isnt great either. i love the concept tho, its got a really smooth feel and overall it looks pretty good. good job

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    this 1 has many problems to it,i can c u want the guy in the center to be the focal which is boring, this tag is also flat and boring, txt isnt very good, and the colors r dull, finally try to not have more than 1 focal in a tag, it messes with the viewer in a very bad way

    read some tutorials on depth and lighting, and try another tag!!





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    lol it's all been pretty brutal so far don't u think? Lets try pick some good points out. I like the concept of the splatter window. But what you've done is make the focal really dark and the bits that are supposed to add on really bright. Erase the Splatter over the centre image, and dodge it around a bit and generally make it brighter. Burn the side splatters down and put a guassian blur 0.5 pixel or 1.0 pix so that they're not quite in focus and blend better. Thats one of the problems atm, it all stands out too much.


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