I like the stock a lot, but that's about it. It has a lot of potential. Text needs to go. Personally I'd take it to more of a sunset/twilight mood and focus the effects around developing really deep lighting. Strikes me as one of those stocks where the light can really tell the story. Right now it's kind of meh..
wheres the rain? o.0 i love the colours, and the words are awesome, text colour and text font isnt great... the colours and the words and the gal's expression are very contradictory; the colour theme suggests a dreary and sad(ish) emotion, while the girl is contempt, and the text is like "FUCK YEAH LETS GO DANCE IN THE RAIN"... the art itself is great, just lacking the fundamental emotion :P
8/10
Rain :3
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