I think the focal was well-placed. The colours are a bit mono. I like the text. Simple but move the box. It looks retarded and its not big enough. The light source at the bottom is distracting. Try lessening the scatter on your smudging. There is some flow in your sig and that is an improvement but try using stocks/renders that have an 'action' feel to it and not renders/stocks that simply look as though they're 'posing'/motionless.
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Originally Posted by Slave
