evangelion

[Glade]

I decided to try and jump in with some text. I tried to keep it simple as possible and moving the letters abit closer to each other.



Tell me what you think.

[--J.O.N--]

very messy

[l PaNdEmOnIuM l]

yea there isnt any flow or depth. try blurring and lay off the sharpen tool

[-MM.Kritez]

To hectic, to many different colors. The render isnt blended well into the tag, try taking a 100 px soft brush eraser and click around the edges.

There would be depth if you put a light blur on the bg, i also dont see a REAL lighting source, thats an easy fix though.

Text is nice!

[Glade]

Thanks for the feedback guys. I will remake the sig and see if I can make the corrections that was pointed out so stay tuned in.

[Glade]

Ok I remade it less hectic and with more depth with a lighting source.

V1


V2


Please list the Pros and Cons specifically so I can capitalize on what I'm doing right and wrong. I want to improve and hopefully do amazing tags like you guys are doing.

[-MM.Kritez]

both are waayyy better in my opinion. way to take criticism!!

[Glade]

Geez now that I compare the old one to the new one I have no idea what I was thinking submitting that.

[-MM.Kritez]

haha, its ok man, the most impressive thing is that you improved the piece so much off of like 5 comments lol

[Glade]

haha, its ok man, the most impressive thing is that you improved the piece so much off of like 5 comments lol

haha thanks. I dislike failed tags so I HAD to remake it and capitalize on what pointers you guys gave me. I actually learned a little bit more on how to blend better and add better depth.

More feedback would be appreciated guys. :]