Some help with my sig

[mapyl]

Hi this is my 1st vertical sig.Can you give me some tips to make it better.I used sharpen dont know if it is looking good to you and don't worry 'bout the text im just writen it like watermark or something its gonna be changed.

[l PaNdEmOnIuM l]

dont sharpen the whole sig just the focal point and blur the background. also the canvas is a little wide. the lighting is random and you need more effects

[mapyl]

10x for the tips.I've change somethings that u tolded me.Here's vers 2

[-MM.Kritez]

in v2 i dont like the random balls of color, erase those.

also work on your lighting, effects, and depth