Squirtle!

[Eddie da man]

hey well been practicing a bit more still fail a bit with ma text haha so this is what i got



feedback please on how i can improve it

[Scrib]

Wow. This is pretty cool, the lights are nice as well as the colours and the flow is meh, but that can be improved The squirtle text isn't working for me, to be honest I think it would look better with no text at all. The border works here, nice work on that. I'm thinking the deep blue colour in the botom left needs to go, it draws attention away rom squirtle because it's so dark. Minor adjustments can make this one better, overall nice work.

[Eddie da man]

oo thanks yea ill fix sum minor stuff up soon

[-MM.Kritez]

the bubble effects are extremely well done. and great depth.

things to work on=
-lighting- the lighting is kind of all over the place, make it more focused on the focal.
-the white bubbles coming out of his mouth need to be erased - they look LQ and dont fit well.
-on the far right side of the sig there is a part of a HUGE teal bubble, erase that
- the text is my least fav part of this- try putting it on overlay and working with its opacity.

overall well done, one of your better pieces

[Dom]

It's pretty nice. Has a nice mixture of blues in there and the lighting is pretty good. I don't like the text at all, try using clipping masks. Need to blend the focal in a bit more though. Good work overall, keep it up!

[Eddie da man]

thanks guys im make sum of them adjustments soon

[fearlessfein]

Nice depth and colour. Love the bubbles.

[Eddie da man]

thanks

[Eddie da man]

updated it a bit to sum advice i was given

v2

[starwar]

yeah nice one