Cannon!

[starwar]

I focused here on the depth point of view
ignore the size and tell me ur c!

[rewritable]

That semi-transparent thing in front of girl is looking not so good, especially over her arm.
Depth seems good, though the cannon could probably do with a bit of bluring, it's further than girl but almost as sharp and being so close to girl is the only thing that distracts the depth a bit.

[starwar]

exactly. i have noticed it will make an update soon! thnx

[starwar]

as rewritable said"d probably do with a bit of bluring," + text addition over the flow of her arm

[rewritable]

Yay! Looks much deeper now.

[starwar]

thanks. /: m working on the in depth and crd adjustment. using smudging and lightening effect.

any kind of help will be greatly appreciated thanks

kritez and rewritable are on my list of thanks