Another Spiderman V2

[IiTz ShAnE]

Ok I took some of your tips into consideration and here is V2. I think it is much improved If I sat up all night and read tutorials I'm sure I could do better lol

[starwar]

hmm seems better than the previous one.
but the sudden change from red to black makes it less mixed up. Use a C4d effect sharpen it and put it in the front.

keep posting!