New Venom tag

[Dom]

Not made anything in about 3 months. I decided I should try get back in to the swing of things so I started a tag and ended with this:

Personally, I think it could be a lot better. I couldn't really get any decent flow.

Comments/Critisisms appreciated.

[Jool]

This is very good, but the focal point could use a sharpen.

Also, the light source isn't really placed properly.

[Dom]

Thanks for the comment Jool. I'll make some adjustments when I get some more comments, so I can make a big clump of them instead of loadsa different versions.

[Jool]

Alright. ^_^

[-MM.Kritez]

im glad your starting to make some tags again. I personally feel like this is alittle dull. there isnt anything in the BG (no stock, smudging, ect) which makes alot of unused space. Its also alittle dark IMO. The C4Ds you have look very nice, i would suggest to just add alittle more to this, it almost looks unfinished.

hope this helps, good work dom

[Kipi]

Uhmm? The flow is quite nice if you ask me, but those purple-ish dots on the sig don't seem to fit. I mean it is Venom so I was expecting a dark sig hence why the purple dots seem out of place.

[tdub230]

I think it looks good other than lacking a little bit of stuff in the BG but other than that great work

[cc.RadillacVIII]

Everything that Kritez mentioned plus the font, it really needs to be changed, try a more regular one.

[Dom]

Thanks for all of your comments so far. I might make a version 2 or may start fresh with the stock.