My 7th sig CnC PLEASE! :)

[Hit A Switch]

Hey can i get some CnC and ways of improving my sig.

[Dakilence]

i like the idea of lighting i just think the render is kinda bad for it

[Dark Method]

Allrite. The way I see it, is you have two focal points. One being your render, and the other being your lighting.

You want your render to be the focal point of your piece. That is what you want to grab one's attention.

To me it goes from being too dark, to being too bright.

Keep at it and you'll get better.

[Hit A Switch]

Better?

[Scrib]

Your focal point here should be the card not the face!

[Nexx]

yeah, it's better but id put that light on the card and have it shine on his face and arm;
sharpen the card and his hand and gradually blur the rest to help depth

[shiv96]

The light I think is in the wrong area of the sig.