halo wars *newest

[dub]

My newest.
42 Layers.
CnC?

[Raditz]

I love making halo tags, and commenting on them.So here goes:

The text does not work well (mostly the yellow color)
I think the right part of the signature is fantastic, but the left part is shabby and it ruins the whole image.

Nice work excluding the text and the left side of the tag.Hope to see more halo from you.

[dub]

thanks man,
im thinking on making a v2 because i notice a couple other things that are bugging me lol

[dub]

v2.

[Raditz]

Now the left side is much better, but you still need to work on text lol

[Scrib]

Nooooo the irst text was awesome, well done! The second version has a better left hand side but the whole thing is oversharpened. And btw it doesn't reallyt matter how many layers are in it