Sayori

[l PaNdEmOnIuM l]

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[Kipi]

The text is a bit too distracting, anyway, I'm luvin' the colors n' blending, nice job. I was also gonna use dat render today. :P

[Xelo]

incredible composition!! love that!! text is fine but the single vertical line divides the tag and should be left out imo. Nice one Pande!!

[Nexx]

i kinda like the text also and agree about the line. kinda hard to read part of it
i think a good burn would help the depth. good job

[-MM.Kritez]

love the depth man, and its definitely better without the text bro

gj

[shiv96]

I love this piece. I like the Version With out the Text though

[Shimarisu]

pretty nice, i also agree with the line thing.

the bg seems a bit flat to me compared to everything else u did. in this case, you used the whole blur background, sharp foreground to create depth thing. perhaps a gradient for the solid colored BG would be nice. A gradient similar to how her hair fades from white to a light blue, maybe something like that would look good. good work nonetheless. =]