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Thread: After War

  1. #1

    Default After War

    Cnc plz .




    "You can delay but time will not"

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    why no cnc1111111111111



    "You can delay but time will not"

  3. #3
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    Patience grasshopper...hehe
    Idk dude...first the girl looks out of proportion but i see what u were getting at. Then the lighting is off. from the shadows on her, looks like it's sposed to come from the left.

    You don't have much middle ground to tie in the girl to the bg. Your text is disturbing the flow there and isn't clearly read.

    Finally, i think this would look better if you moved her face to better fit in the rule of thirds and should be way sharper than it is. keep at it


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    The Entire Thing looks like a mess to me. There no Flow,Looks Chaotic.
    I would make the render smaller and Less Sharp. Other than that Good Job!
    O yea I know this is off topic but Nexx can you move my sig to the center like yours?
    Or Tell me how to do it?


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