Prototype

[starwar]

I dont know how it has been done. but i did it after some long time. i like the focal so i am in hurry to pick it, lol

plz cnc.

[cs4pro]

I think the colors in the sig doesnt match whit eachother.
The text is too big and some places are oversharpend.
try to create some more depht by blurring the BG some.
I would like to see some lightning here 2.
Keep working at it star

[starwar]

well the depth is quite clear, and the text is exactly relevant to the original idea. lightening is there i dont know where did you look while cnc lol

its fine i guess

[Kotora]

It's definitely an improvement, create gradients in different opacity levels so you can balance the colors of your sig more and make it look more natural. The text I don't really like either, don't make it too big or else it's gonna distract from your focal.

-EDIT- Depth? Where? There's no depth on this, it looks plain. If you really wanna achieve on it, first learn what it is then practice with tuts. Also like CS4 said, some parts look too sharp aswell.

[starwar]

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh realyyyyyy ok i will improve it