Nice but the orange does not fit the rest of the sig which is cyan.
It's a little to busy with just a li'll to much splatter, and try to make em a clip mask.
The flow is totally wrong, look at her, she is leaning to the right and your flow goes to the left. You should make it flow from the bottom left corner to the top right. You also need to blend in Alba more.
Change the right sides bg color, redirect the flow and clean up the focal is my advices. You got a sensual and calm render, not a chaotic one
Keep working on it!
Last edited by cc.RadillacVIII; 01-24-2010 at 03:14 AM.
a new jessica alba tag
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