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    Default Dream


    First, the positioning. I'm kinda stuck with it at the edge. Since move it an inch there's a strait edge all the way down.

    Second, my obligation for using the stock.

    reiko-stocks
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    Critiques welcomed.

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    Any suggestions?

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    The render needs to stand out some more.
    The whole sig is very bright and it looks like everything has a low opacity.
    Try to fix that.
    Also I would like to see some more effects. Use some c4d's to make them.

    Look up at some tuts here on the void to improve your skills.
    Keep It Up




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    as Cs4pro said, also keep the focal clean. stripes, dots etc make a face dirty.

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    what they said lol, i do like the colours, they are easy on the eyes.



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    Thanks, I was trying to go for a foggy, dream like state.

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    Working on removing the rest of the dots, though the layer is being picky.

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    i'd say this is defintly an improvement, the vocal is alot clearer and certainly draws more attention to it.



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    Looks Better than before for sure
    BUt u should add some c4ds for sure like cs10 pro said


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    I'll try adding a C4D to it but I'm not very good with those. Could someone link me to a tutorial the explains basic ways to use them?

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