break design now opinions or i will kill u

[lahabz]

Ren

[Soap]

Why do you need to break design? Nobody needs to break design, they just need to learn how to communicate. Design is communication.

People I meet every day are often up their own arses. Last night I met a guy who owns the second larges design company in the UK and he said to me. 'What is it you do?'
I replied, 'I'm a communicator.' He said, looking at me somewhat perplexed, 'Communicator?'
I replied, 'Sure! I communicate with people.' He looked at me askance and said, 'Are you a designer too?'
I said, 'Yeah. I'm a designer too. But I'm a communicator more. I just use design and typography to do that.
If you can't be a communicator before you become anything else you may as well just give up.'

The tag is, well, a tag. The fancy-filter suff you've executed on the thing has killed your text,
I can read the K without looking very close and I can't see the 'design' at all.
So to me it's just saying 'brea', right now. If you're going to make a statement with your tag,
make the typographical element the staple of the tag, not some small bit of text in the corner of your filter-whoring.
There's my two-penneth.

[lahabz]

i know but i didnt find another way to make it fit with the background

[Soap]

i know but i didnt find another way to make it fit with the background

Then change the background :P - If you wanted to make a statement about breaking design, well, break design! This is good, but just the same stuff that everyone else is doing, some dude and lots of filterness. There's nothing really 'breaking' about it. text first - then everything else when it comes to statement making

[Xelo]

oversharpenned, colors look to gradiented, needs flow, not a fan sorry

[Hyggan]

It's just a messy clusterfuck, just get rid of the text if you can make it work?

[Hyggan]

can't*

Isn't there a edit button?

[tekken]

dont try and make the render fit the background, make the BG fit the render.
you effects seems a bit random and chaotic, try creatin some flow and dont overdo the effects.

[shiv96]

Yes yes agreed with fellow posters!

[Soap]

dont try and make the render fit the background, make the BG fit the render.
you effects seems a bit random and chaotic, try creatin some flow and dont overdo the effects.

Don't do any of the above. Don't use any effects. Create something totally new and 'break design'. Otherwise it's just 'same shit' design.