Fight Club

[Kotora]

Didn't showed this off before,



Any tips to improve it, perhaps? Or is it alright as it is? Also, do you guys think I went a bit too far with the text..? I dunno.

[Sparda]

looks good, but the red might be a little to dominant,
however, that may just be my sense of taste.

aside from that i like it, nice sig

[Xelo]

like it! good use off c4d's and effects. i like the text (bit hard to read..) good focal placement and good depth.. yeah!!

[Scottyy]

Ok, i just watched this for the first time 2 days ago... it was messed up and it made my head hurt. It had a grungy feel to it and i feel like you captured the same feeling into this tag. My thought with the text is that its white. I dont like using plain white in any of my tags unless needed. The text grabs too much attention from the face of tyler/brad pitt. If you want, a clipping mask would look good on it. Other than that, Good Job! Could you share the stock/render possibly?

[Kotora]

Thanks for the cnc guys, I really appreciate it. :]

As for scotty:




Edit - forgot to mention but this was my first time using C4D's as part of the effects.

[shiv96]

Agreed with The rest of the posters!
Nice Stock too!

[Scottyy]

thanks!