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[lahabz]

[Touch]

Oh shit, my eyes! This is TOO SHARP!!!

[smallboss]

yeah too sharp for me too but i find it abit messy as in too much going on..

i think it would look better if you was to get rid of all the stuff around the dude, but thats my personal taste

[shiv96]

To Sharp~!
Also To Much Fx. Erase some around your render.
Looks Messy
Keep at it

[gr4ph1kP4ND4]

blend more. needs some lowlights. i like how you make the layers intertwine, but i think you need to choose a focal point and accent it, rather than just layers on top of layers making layers look like... a picture...

and...
i'm pretty sure that kids japanese...
my asian-radar isnt as good as my dad's (i'm only half chinese...) but... i'm pretty sure of that... not positive... but yeah.... lol...........

[lahabz]

lolzz