Good flow, but the colors are monotone and the light source distracts too much. As for the text, go with simple fonts, fancy ones just tend to distract aswell.
the bg is a bit boring. better to keep it more empty imo. i kind a like the text. it goes nice with the focal, so i don't agree with kotora on that, but that's just my opinion.
put the white light behinddddd her head so that it accents her face rather than washing it out....
whats with that white line? its like.... groping her boob.... gahhh weird... anywho i think rather than having that halo of light above her head, you should use another one of those white lines around it to bring that theme back into the picture more than once.
i love the background, and its a great choice of colors
text is interesting, not something i've seen before, i like it
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Originally Posted by shiv96
