Animus

[Provided]

Sadly enough, it has been 2 weeks since I've made something. So I felt I had to now that I have some time.
C&C please

[Karter]

It doesn't look too bad. It honestly doesn't look like you did much to it though.

Also, no black text. Change the color. :P

[Provided]

Noted. I shall add some more C4D.
Text colour is actually the purple from the sky and the same color as the border colour, but I'll change it anyway. Maybe a slightly lighter colour will work better.
It might not seem like it, but there quite a lot of layers

[Provided]

V2:


Fixed text. It appeared black because it was beneath the photofilters and gradientmaps.
Added a little more clipping masks and C4D, added a space stock, changed the coloring a little.

[THAIsack]

i say it would be cooler with out the red fire eyes but crazy sig

[Provided]

The fire starting form the eyes is part of the render, but I could just erase it off course.
So it would be better that I just change my concept?
Personally I don't think it's that bad, but it could be better. I just don't know what I screwed up.

[Karter]

I just think the render isn't the greatest choice because it isn't really doing anything for you to make it stand out. (Other than the fire), and because most of the render is black.

[Provided]

I'm happy to hear I didn't really screw up anything, but not being able to do something sucks too
Either way, thanks for the replies! I'll keep it in mind when picking my next render.

[Janessabuffy]

Need to think about it.





--------------------------
Termite san francisco