Timeshift.

[ColorBliind]

Comments/criticism appreciated.

[Jool]

The background is too plain and the focal point is over-sharpened.

[mapyl]

interesting sig,kinda the render is too sharpened

[cs4pro]

I agree with Jool.
I reccomend you to follow some tuts. You'll learn how to make nice effects and how to blend your render etc.
Also the text needs work.
Keep at it

[Shadow379]

Its too plain tbh