Prince of Persia

[HellBent]

This is my first piece of work in over a year. I feel accomplished even though its not what i wanted/expected. Im just glad i actually finished something.
I would appreciate it if you guys tore this apart, giving me explicit detail on how i could better my approach on the upcoming works I may do. (Meaning extreme C&C lol)

[sherry+]

lol looks a beginner sig.

you could start by creating focal. and border thick would be preferred !

[chonfat]

too much negative space? o.o but try going over tuts so u can start good again

[shiv96]

Bg is too plain.
To much negative space
You kind overdid the smudging...
C4d needs to be blended a bit more.
Text is hard to see
Read some tuts man and keep at it