Another sig

[Zane267]

Can you guys tell me what I need to work on in my new sig

[<graphic here>]

the text kinda stands out =P

[Sparda]

mhm, well first of the text, its awefully big and on top of that its animated,
so it realy soakes up all the attention, i would advice to for a more subtile non animated text

secondly, i think its generally better to keep your render/effects inside your canvas.
this will make it easier to make an interesting vocal point and blend in your render

finally, be carefull with sharpening, its realy easy to overdo it

[Gallagher]

Text is meh, the yellow glow with the red doesn't mesh with the rest of the tag.
It's oversharpened and the black splatter that runs off the rectangle to the right goes against the flow of the tag and it really throws it off.

[shiv96]

Animated Text is HORRIBLE!
Looks to Sharp
The Effects are Very Messy
Keep at it

[Zane267]

ok thanks

[chonfat]

hehe i like it a lot but yea the text stands out way too much

[Zexi]

render oversharpened,
text doesnt fit,
splatters put randomly.