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    well im new at this so tell me what you guys think

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    ahmm, I think there's no definite flow
    the text is kinda large,
    and the canvass is too wide for your render
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    thanks well im new to the whole scene and im still learning im not photoshop friendly as of yet i want to check out some of the tuts on here is there any in particular that are good for me at this level that im at if anyone can i would really appreciate it

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    The text stands out too much.

    But on the other hand I love the contrast between the character and the colors used in the background. Nice work.


    They must find it difficult... Those who have taken authority as the truth, rather than truth as the authority.

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    ok some tips:

    the text is too big and distracting. you have two renders of afro samurai which make it hard to distinguish what the focal is. when working with two renders, usually you would lower the opacity which it seems like you did but by putting them next to each other it makes it look like you intentianly made two focal points. also you're effects are pretty random which develops no flow. you should also try adding effects in front of the render instead of just working on a background. On the other hand, for a beginner this is decent. it shows a variety of things that other beginners dont have. good job keep working at it

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    crop 1/4 off the right, get a nice cloudy BG blur parts for depth, get rid off text.... done

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    Agreed with JIC and Xelo 100%


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