Susan Coffey

[FatalFury]

critique + pointers appreciated

first sig in a very long time ... so be gentle :P

[Liquid]

i like this alot.Very simplistic and blends in well,the colors are good too.KIU

[FatalFury]

bump :P

[Applejuice]

I'm sorry, but somehow I dont get the feel of it. Liek the effects and such, but I just dont feel it.

[shiv96]

I like and Fx and Flow
Text is Okkk,could be better
I see theres some flow,alittle
Its To Large to be a tag though.
Keep it Up

[excellence]

not bad, love the flow, the right is a bit messy, and your c4d should be erased where ever it hits the girl, the typography needs work, i would get rid of the 'fatalfury' part completely and i would make the 'susan coffey' font smaller