Third Signature Attempt.

[Sioux]

It's been a while since I posted anything though this has mostly been due to bouts of laziness and just life stealing me. I returned to the site last night however and re-read through the posts I made of my previous two signatures and embarked on a creative journey to try once more to learn the signature craft.

Here it is. My main issue being I spent way too much time experimenting rather then planning so I was all over the board with this one but, I think I'm learning at the very least as I feel this one is miles ahead of my previous two in terms of basic signature fundamentals.

---V1.

--V2. Dramatic lighting?

Some Comments and or Critiques would be immensely helpful.

[Xelo]

v1 you focal is drowning in the effects.
v2 much better, but you focal is to small compared to the sig.... so:
crop the upper half off your V2 get rid off the text and you have yourselfz a nice spritesig!

[Sioux]

Well, I followed the advice and I like the direction where it went. I actually have a focal point with some degree of depth now.

<-- appropriate changes.

<--- cropped.

[chonfat]

i would suggest u to do the sig smaller since the render is tiny maybe even smaller then the crop one cause its a sprite right?

[cC.Shadowvector]

Well sprite tags shouldve been smaller and a bit more bigger but this one is okay, the c4d effects could have been improved in effects but its fine. XD KIU

[Sioux]

Well, I started this thing around 1000 Pixels x 800 Pixels to really get in the details in the C4Ds as I painstakingly got in there to have all of it fit and not overlap and any place that it did I painted over/clone stamped.

After everything was said and done I shrunk it down. I figured if drawings and paintings work well like that in their creation processes why not signatures?