First in months

[cC.ShorterGFX]

Give me some hard critism so i can get back into this stuff

[Joekz]

it needs more depth, looks like the render is yucky quality i'd like a few more effects too. but its a great start. better than what i made on my return

[cC.Shadowvector]

A bit of better depth is needed, c4d placement is kind of fine but try to use colours, its good XD

[shiv96]

Good Depth Potential in this
More Fx
its LQ
The light source is good though
Good Luck on the Getting back into things